It does seem strange to think that this is the first. But, in fifteen years of writing captions to go with my photos and videos, I’ve never written anything that feels (to me) like a complete narrative. But, that all changed this past weekend with my first ever entry on The Erotic Mind Control Story Archive.
The first two chapters are up now and the next two have already been mailed off to Simon for inclusion in this week’s update. Please go give it a read and by all means let me know what you think! I’m very curious how people respond to my words without the customary images that normally go with them.
Casting Characters
As I was browsing the MCforum, I spotted this really interesting thread about casting actors and adult performers in stories that you’re writing or reading. Its a really timely topic for me, personally, as I did exactly that with this story.
Since it originated as a photo manip idea, Pleasure Professionals, I had always thought of certain characters as the adult performers in the pics. Other characters that got added later were also, at least in my mind, based on other adult models and performers.
I suppose it’s somewhat second nature for me to do that sort thing, given that I’m almost always working from visual media. But I found it really helped my process to have such a clear idea of the what the characters looked like and how they might sound or behave.
Its very neat to see authors and readers talking about doing the same thing.
I’ll be back with more insight next week after the next couple of chapters are posted to The Archive. Do let me know what you think if you’ve had an opportunity to give it a read!
14 Comments
Madboy7931
Wow! That is such a great start to the story 🙂 Can’t wait to read more!
Draphy
Did you cast adult performers for this story as well? If so, who is playing your leads?
Enjoyable start and I’m looking forward to the next chapters!
callidus
Yes I did! In my next blog post, I’ll talk more about that and show off a handful of concept manip pieces I created during the course of writing the story.
aelfstone
I’m very interested in where this story leads. I can’t read any kind of corporate or company-setting story without thinking of your outstanding 2017 photo story ‘Compliance’. I hope this new story shares more with that story than just the title!
Hayushiba7
Love the story.
I’m a fan of the reveal in the first chapter that the infiltration scene was just for play, but I do wish I knew how that all plays out as well.
Looking forward to more chapters!
beth
I noticed your story only the second week, when chapters 3 and 4 posted, and it I don’t mind admitting that I was excited to see it! I just now finished chapter 5, and if it wasn’t before, the hook is completely set now. It’s wonderful, and I’m shocked to learn it’s your first full-length story. Honestly, it stands in its own, no images needed. I check EMCSA regularly and just to let you know, yours was the very first story I went looking for today. I can’t wait for more and would recommend it to anyone … in fact I have!
Harlequin
Very enjoyable story. Especially liked Samantha’s session with Goddess Aisling, one of the best written scenes I’ve read on the EMCSA. Looking forward to the continuation of that interaction. Just wanted to encourage you, since so many of the best written stories on the EMCSA remain unfinished. Good luck!
callidus
Thank you all for the very kind words, that’s much appreciated! Chapter 6 is out with today’s update. I hope you all enjoy it!
Madboy7931
Part 6 was everything I hoped for and MORE! Just thinking what Samantha was listening to on the phone at the end has me totally on edge waiting for chapter 7!!
Bethany
Like a few of the others, I just want to let you know that YES, I’m reading and can’t wait for chapter 7 now. The story has been incredible so far, and definitely one of the hotter (for me) stories I’ve read on the archive – the way you wrote Samantha’s and Aisling’s scene in chapter 6 was just beautiful, I love a long slow induction like that, where the the ‘victim’ can at least believe they have the ability to resist. THANK YOU for sharing this story!
Vanderbilt
Aha! I have now realized that in the “Pleasure Professionals” photo that is Aisling and Samantha from the story. I am slow on the uptake sometimes.
beth
Okay, so more than anything THANK YOU for sharing Compliance and Acquisition, it was spectacular, I loved it. I never had any doubts your story would be good once I heard you intended publishing it, and of course I was right. Much as I’d have liked more (and who wouldn’t) I think you wrapped it up just perfectly … so as not to spoil anything for anyone who’s not read it, I’ll just say the ending was perfect for my tastes, and the heat factor to the story as a whole was … mmmm. Thank you, Callidus.
Sasa
Thank you for uploading Compliance, i was eagerly following it since the first two chapters and it had me checking regularly every week for more, well frustratedly speculating at pleasure professionals and why it was on 100% so long, is it a crossover? is it the last chapter? and like that you had me hooked and checking both the story and the blog, pouring over every image, so from the bottom of my heart, Thank you for enslaving me, addicting my hopeless little mind to your kinky writing style and stories.
here’s hoping i never recover.
Mindwashed Jewel
I really loved the story. I keep going back to the first 2 Samantha sections in chapter 6 a lot. I’m curious how the other ending would have played out, though the way it does end was satisfying fo me. Thank you so much for creating this for us to enjoy.